Ode to the Golden Past

Ode to the golden past

An era still unknown

But yet, it does not last

When the demons are shown

Mostly all obfuscate

Especially to you

Yet unlike those of late

These have 1 horn, not 2

Please be gentle with the critiques, I wrote this over the span of 3 hours.

One thought on “Ode to the Golden Past

  1. Thanks so much for posting this, John. The poem has power. But the “you” in the poem and the subject of the poem as a whole is not clear to me — and that lessens a little of that power.

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